What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
It
Never pays
To be too
Rash
What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
Step out of
The role
In which you are
Cast
What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
Discover
life
Can be a
Bash
What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
Take
Some time to
Savor the
Past
What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
Life’s
Much more than
Amassing
Cash
What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
Show the world
You’ve got
Some
Sass
What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
Life isn’t a
Measly
Fifty yard
Dash
What’s the big hurry
Not so fast
In life’s marathon
Strive to
Finish
Last

Lovely!
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Thank you kindly.
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“strive to finish last”…I love that!
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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I, for one, am too wise to ever get to the finish line! 🙂
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Way to go, Tom!
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I completely agree!! I saw a photo the other day of a snowstorm in my city in the early 1900s that left 16 inches of snow. They didn’t have the means to clear it, so it just had to melt. I thought of how no one could handle that today because we can’t slow down and just take things as they come. I really like the poem & the clever way of reminding us the importance of slowing down😊💞!
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Thanks, much! Yes, the ability to slow down seems to be a lost art in modern times.
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I really enjoyed this. It has a hectic quality in the words that contrast with what the words are saying. What is so nice about this is that I could feel the haste and the hurry all roaring past while the message was calm and moving slowly. I don’t think I’m making any sense here but …. I enjoyed this poem.
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It makes perfect sense, Anne. I’m glad you picked up on the dichotomy. I like this one read out loud for that reason.
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YES! Reading it aloud would be ideal.
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Good advice for sure.
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Thanks for commenting!
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Loved this one!!
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Thanks, Sharon.
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Definitely wise!😊
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Yes, hopefully so!
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