Photo by Stormseeker @ Unsplash
Sinking further
Down, down
Feet can’t touch the
Ground, ground
Afraid that I might
Drown, drown
Darkness invades
Around, around
Heart in chest
Pounds, pounds
Thoughts of panic
Bound, bound
Sinking further
Down, down
Life lost but heaven
Found, found
Out of My Write Mind 
Definitely an expression of how life may be for many these days. A picture is worth a thousand words!
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Perfect prose, Sandy!
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Glad you think so, Eliza. Thanks.
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Effective repetition
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Thanks, VJ
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Welcome
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That is so creepy. I guess I must have a fear of drowning.
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Yes, it is creepy. And as I don’t swim, it really gets to me!
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I am a strong swimmer but it gets me too
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Very well captured the panic of this situation. I’d prefer a rescue, but ending in heaven is great too. Thanks for joining in Sandy
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Nice
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Thanks.
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Wow! That was intense, well done!
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Such a creepy image!
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