When he invited her in and she saw what he was displaying
out in the open in his living room, she immediately knew……
He was a man
With
A tender
Heart
Involved in
The community
Doing his
Part
Always quick
To
Lend a helping
Hand
Never
Purporting
To be
Grand
Not inclined
From responsibility
To
Dart
Someone she would
Fall for
Right from the
Start
Out of My Write Mind 
Good take on the story starter!
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Trying some new things. Glad you liked it!
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The starter nicely plays to a twist which you cleverly turn to a positive because until then it sounds ominous so catches the reader.
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Thanks, Paul. I’m not much of a storyteller. This is new territory for me.
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That “Not much” is a good much!
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