Remember me
When I am
Gone
I’m feeling weak
It won’t be
Long
My throat is
Parched
My head’s so
Warm
The time
Is past
To sound the
Alarm
I issued e-mails
Texts and
Tweets
But no one
Could
Find time to
Meet
Remember me
When I am
Gone
You just
Slept through
My last
Swan song
Mother Earth
Poignant and farr to real!
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Unfortunately so.
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Wow – that makes you stop and think!
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Thanks.
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thank you.
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You are welcome.
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Beautiful poem and touching..thank you for sharing with us.
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My pleasure. Thanks for your comment!
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Wakening call..especially in view of the national disasters occurring daily
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It is just that.
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Tragic but true
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Unfortunate, indeed.
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It seems to be main topic of conversation these days. We all cry. The young people say that the earth is too far gone. What a selfish lot we’ve been.
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Time for positive action.
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Gave me goosebumps.
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This sounds a bit weird…but I’m glad I creeped you out!
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I am sorry I gave you that feeling. You did not creep me out at all. The fact that we are ignoring mother nature’s call and causing further depredation chilled me to the core.
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I’m glad the piece had a strong impact. Thanks for commenting.
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You are welcome.
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This gave me goosebumps.
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REsonates so strongly with my inner feelings about this, powerful piece Sandy.
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So glad this struck a chord with you, Paul.
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It sure does.
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Wonderful poem…sad but too true.
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Yes, time for us to wake up.
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